Ma Battle Roar!

[FullMetal_old]

On a cold, full server night, a sudden death has occured in Festers place with FullMetal known as the survivor of team blu, red have 5 players left looking for him. He is not hiding, just waiting for the perfect time to strike them all at the hearts with his mighty rockets. Mic spammers including himself are roaring down the cheap and nasty mics they all have, he hides and adapts to this map, it's name; geothermal. Slowly FullMetal scans the local area of his intel room waiting for the red team to come, he waits and stays. Then immerging from the sounds of the computers in the intel room, he listens closely and hears footsteps, he prepares for his strike to come, they bunny hop through the room not spotting FullMetal in the corner, then he turns his mic on full blast and screams 'LEERRROYYY JENNNKINNNSS' and he attacks at will killing the medic and a soldier with a fatal blast to the floor, the loud scream of Heavythehobbiy is heard with more chants of 'Go Full!!!' he is more ready than ever to kick ass taking two more out with a crit rocket. Just one remains, he's in plain sight scared and starts to run. FullMetal quickly grabs a ammo pack supplying his last 4 rockets, he fires into the spy's back and its a crit! Just about to hit and then something strange happens. Something shows on his monitor saying
Kicked, Reason: Mic-spam
Slowly he grabs his speaker and smashes it on his monitor numerous times. Brings up Steam chat and someone named dintbo (bosco) has said 'hah i warned you, shame you actually did good'






That was my english homework, make a story on a video game and i did TF2, it was meant to be short but please say whether its good or bad, i dunno whether to do this or one on WoW, Thanks ^^ was good fun making it

[DragoonKnight]

nice one bosco

[MountieXXL]

awesome Bosco, A+ for you!

[dintbo(aka bosco)]

Brilliantly written FullMetal, it really is. As a piece of school work it is excellent. Well Done

[FullMetal_old]

Thanks, i wanna be a journalist when im older so i sorta might start making TF2 stories about fests place xD

[Engima]

Good work buddy.

Very descriptive and well written.

Lee.

[Jonnywhy]

Well I actually thought that it was a true story, so well told! (Though I did find it a bit strange that you would take out 5 players on your own...)

[FullMetal_old]

Pfff it happens, also i got Spore today, w00t!!

[Selby]

quite a few grammatical errors, so I say a B

of course it's not a true story!

very good though

[Del]

Well done Bosco, good man. A for you, B for FullMetal